Deyes High School mock- up newsletter

Below is the mock up I have created for the Deyes High School newsletter, whilst creating this I had the idea that the newsletter should be aimed at the students of Deyes High School. I believe that I have started to portray this vision by the use of the fonts I have used for the masthead, also I haven't used the Deyes Logo and specialist science college logo as the central piece of the newsletter, instead I have used a image of students and two puffs in order to attract students to the magazine.

please leave any feedback you feel will assist me in the creation of my final college magazine